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School was starting in a week. Tiffany had pretty much forgot about Sierra. Tiffany and Charlotte were getting ready to look and feel amazing for the first day of school.
"Okay C, so what's the plan for today?" Tiffany asked.
"We're going to Airhead to get our hair highlighted and extensions maybe, then BeachStreet for tanning and eyelash extensions. And probably Aps for massages. Sound good?" Charlotte said, sounding overly like an assistant.
"Yep!" Tiffany said.
Tiffany and Charlotte got into a waiting town car, which took them to Airhead, an über cool, über trendy, über pink salon. They were greeted by an overly preppie attendant who was dressed entirely in pink, up to her pink-highlighted hair.
"Welcome to Airhead!" She said in a very hyper voice.
Tiffany smirked at her, then tugged Charlotte's hand inside the salon. She immediately walked over to the person working at a desk, which had a large, pink cloud with the word AIRHEAD above it.
"Hello Miss Chase, Miss DeWaters! Your room is to your left, and I'm sorry, I had to put another client inside your personal room."
Tiffany fumed for a second, then instantly regained herself.
"Yes... That's fine... and who did you say will be sharing OUR private room?" Tiffany asked in a fake sweet tone.
"I didn't. You ladies will be sharing a room with... HER." she pointed to a girl with super long, pale blonde hair who was looking at the wall of different shades of pink nail polish.
"She looks familiar. Do we kno-." Charlotte was cut off by a loud shh sound Tiffany made. The girl had turned around. It was Sienna.
"Wait.. WHAT!" Tiffany shouted to the poor girl working behind the pink sparkly desk.
"She is NOT-" This time Tiffany was cut off by a measured voice that came from Sienna.
"Do you have a problem with me?" Sienna smirked.
Tiffany never would admit defeat, so she put on a fake smile.
"Of course not- I was just surprised to see YOU here. I would've expected you to be somewhere, less established." Tiffany said with a huge smirk on her face.
"Same with you" Sienna shot back.
Charlotte cut in.
"Whatever Tiff, lets just get our stuff done then get out of here." she said.
Tiffany and Charlotte had decided to get the same Japanese perms that they had seen in an article in Vogue, hair extensions, and then they were going to get lo-lights.
Sienna had just gotten highlights that made Tiffany even more jealous of her natural hair. Not that she admit it, though.
Tiffany and Charlotte had already gotten their hair straightened and were getting their highlights in. Sierra was done, but was hanging around, watching them. And hour later Charlotte and Tiffany's highlights were done. Their stylist blow-dried their hair ( with a pink dryer of course!) and straightened it. He turned them around in the mirror at the same time and.....
"OHMYGOD! WHAT DID YOU DO TO MY/TIFFANY'S HAIR!" Charlotte and Tiffany screamed at the same time.
" I ASKED FOR COGNAC LOW-LIGHTS! NOT GOLD!" she shouted.
"Calm down miss, I'll fix it." said the stylist with a hint of british accent.
"You better!" she threatened.
He then set on to making Tiffany's hair darker and the way she wanted it, dyeing the salon's signature VIP pink streak on the underside of her hair.
All the while, Sienna was laughing hysterically while Charlotte was moving back their appointments at all the different salons.
Once Tiffany was done getting her hair done, it looked amazing. It was long, dark, and super-straight. Her and Charlotte paid, then they walked to BeachStreet, which was right across the street. Charlotte and Tiffany went to the desk of BeachStreet, and the lady working it greeted them.
" Reservations?" she asked.
" Charlotte DeWaters and Tiffany Chase. Duh!" Charlotte said before Tiffany could say anything.
"Of course, of course. LESLEY!"
A tiny blonde stylist ran over to the desk.
" Yes, Lesley, these girls have Tan appointments and eyelash extensions. Kay?" the receptionist said.
"Yep!" Lesley replied, in a hyper voice.
She led Tiffany and Charlotte back to the tanning booths, and gave them instructions. Once they were done, they went to a different room and got eyelash extensions.
As they were walking out, Tiffany turned to Charlotte.
" You like my new lashes?" Tiffany asked while fluttering her eyelashes.
"Yes, of course darling!" Charlotte said in a faux-french accent. The girls giggled, then ran back to the car, heading back to Tiffany's apartment.
The next day, Tiffany went over to Charlotte's townhouse. A maid answered the door.
She asked for her name. She's obvi new!.. Tiffany thought.
"Tiffany Chase, here for Charlotte." she said. A few moments later, Charlotte appeared at the door.
"Come on in Tiff- my parents aren't home right now, but my brother is." Charlotte said. Charlotte had an older brother named Burke, and him and Charlotte looked like twins.
"Kay." Tiffany said.
They went up to Charlotte's brick red room, and sat down on her king- size bed.
"So... we have Sienna. Info please?" Tiffany said.
"Yeah, I have it right here!" Charlotte said.
Name:Sienna Victorie Blue.
From: Paris, France
Sports: Tennis, Horseback Riding, Lacrosse
Friends: Alexis Knoll, Danielle Libbe, Anna Dennison
Favs:Riding, Gelato, Sparkles,Sienna Miller,Lacoste, Anna Sui, Prada, Miu Miu
Dislikes: Techno,Rap,Country Music, New York, Juicy Couture
Charlotte read off her list.
"Amazing information C! Any leads to why she left Paris yet?" Tiffany said.
"Not yet," Charlotte replied," but I'm going to call her old friends ASAP to find out." Charlotte said. She thought for a moment, then widened her wide blue eyes.
" I cannot WAIT for something really exciting to happen this year. New girl- prepare to sink down to the Z list!" Charlotte said, then giggling hysterically.
Three days later, It was the day before school started. Charlotte was over at tiffany's house, helping her figure out what to wear.
Tiffany held up a coral micro mini with a matching henley and a white cami underneath.
"How does this make me look? Hot, or like a giant piece of gum?" Tiffany asked, laughing.
"Um, I think it makes you look a little gum-ish." Charlotte laughed along with Tiffany.
Tiffany rummaged through her giant closet, searching through a summer of shopping, to find the perfect thing to wear.
"Aha!" Tiffany exclaimed like an evil scientist who just discovered something. "I found the PERFECT thing!'
"What?" Charlotte said.
"Hold on, lemme put it on and accessorize it. Be right back." Tiffany said.
Tiffany back into her closet, and found silver gladiator sandals. She found some silver necklace chains and put them around her neck. She slipped on the outfit, then turned around to face Charlotte.
"Tada!" Tiffany exclaimed like a Vegas showgirl, throwing her hand high in the air.
"OHMYGOD!" Charlotte shouted. "I love it!"
Tiffany was wearing a pink silk grecian goddess minidress, that was sure to impress everyone on the first day of school.
"Yay! I found my outfit!" Tiffany said, "what are you wearing?"
"Well... I actually was going to wear the same thing, but it a khaki color. Is that ok? Its also longer than yours." Charlotte asked.
"Yep. Just wear flats instead of gladiator sandals and no jewelry." Tiffany said.
"Ok." Charlotte agreed.
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16 Comments
Savannah
6/4/2008 10:41:58 am
ummm is this where the lisi lovers post?? some1 plz respond to me!!
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aj
6/4/2008 02:59:25 pm
no u send it 2 the email address....
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Savannah
6/5/2008 02:25:02 am
thanks but I just want to comment soo..... Ya
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savannah
6/5/2008 07:59:53 pm
is any1 on? Where I'm @ its 6 am. I stayed up all night!!
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k, i liked this a little bit better than the 2st part....nice use of details....didnt like 2 many uses of 'overly' and the hyper assistants....like to hear a bit more details on the second salon tanning and ilash xtensions. plus the whole japanese perms was prob taken from the clique
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This one was a little better, but I feel like you needed to take the part about Japanese hair x-tensions and their spa day out. It's just irrelevant to the story. I have to say though you did improve but I don't see why she would wear a Grecian dress to school. That's a little too formal.
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Caroline
6/14/2008 10:32:07 am
I like your story because it's a lot like the Clique =] But the only thing is....it seems very shallow, and i'm not talking about the characters. it seems like you're only telling what the girls are saying and not enough of what's beneath the story line, like what the girls are thinking or past events that lead up to certain events. i don't like criticizing people's work, but I'm just letting you know
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Sarah
6/16/2008 03:04:00 pm
I just re-read the clique in certian parts. Japanese perms? Alicia and Olivia got matching ones. Grecian goddess dress? Massie and Alicia were fighting over a gold one.
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Juliette
6/18/2008 08:12:13 am
do we have to send it to the email? i don't have my own address where i can send emails.
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TO JULIETTE
6/18/2008 08:41:15 am
I OWN THE SITE LEAVE IT HERE AND ILL CUT-PASTE IT INTO A BLOG KAY?
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Juliette
6/25/2008 12:38:29 pm
Untitled Juliette Crotter Project (UJCP)
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Juliette
7/9/2008 01:23:42 pm
Chapter Two
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chip
8/3/2008 04:54:18 pm
go to lisi lovers to find out!
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12/13/2010 02:45:05 pm
Nothing except the knots of grieving relatives mourning their dead, the red-clad rescue workers searching the ground for human remains
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